Re: Please correct my English
投稿者: yumehon33 投稿日時: 2010/11/08 12:25 投稿番号: [8679 / 17704]
きっとAPECには英語の達人が一杯いらしゃって
おられるのでしょうね うらやましいです
外国語の習得は日本人にとって本当に難しい問題です
例えば、海に落ちた隊員を銛で突いた というところなど
銛 harpoon
という表現は、手にもてるような銛なのか、
もっともっと邪悪な 大きな銛なのか
英語の表現がわかりません
それから、
「二人の隊員の名誉に懸けて」
というところも
For the honor of the both persons
みたいに for でいいのか、もっと適切な表現が
あるのか教えてください
船のスクリュウで殺された
も was killed with the screw
みたいに with でいいのか by なのか 日本人には
とても判別がむずかしいです
「はらわたが煮えくり返るほど怒る」
というところも
are boiling with rage
と表現しましたが、もっと適切な表現があるでしょうか
参考までに 不出来な英文を再掲いたします
The youtube ttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEIb○○○○ presents the following
news.
A former member of the Marine Sel○ Defense Force (Kai○o) said that some
members of the Chin○e fishing boat stuck two Kai○o members who fell into the
sea with harpoons.
Indeed, in Ishig○ki-jima Island outskirts, quite strict gag law of not saying
anything to this news, was spread at the same level as fascism.
For the honor of the both persons, who died at their post, he is presenting
this news now.
The both persons are veterans of being members of the agency eight years
together.
It is easily understood that it was an item which should have understood that
this news had great bad influence globally enough now.
However, the cabinet members of a country ordered concealment.
There is not such the humiliation in the past for Kai○o who set up life for
patrolling such territorial waters.
They got into the fishing boat daringly but they were dropped in the sea by the
cosh of the members of the fishing boat without being able to resist them with
being bound by the constitution Article NONE.
One person was helped but died instantly and another one was killed with the
screw of the Chin○e fishing boat.
At the time of the recent arrest of the captain, some members of the fishing
boat held the automatic gun in the ship. He told that he heard it from a
person of the sel○ defense official who moved to Kai○o.
Kai○o members could arrest the captain in danger, and it did not become the
fatal case somehow.
Although they compel to drive these peace officers into such dangerous
situation, the members in the Democra○c Party did not do anything.
Therefore, it seems that these officers are boiling with rage to the Democra○c
Party which decided the release of the captain plainly.
おられるのでしょうね うらやましいです
外国語の習得は日本人にとって本当に難しい問題です
例えば、海に落ちた隊員を銛で突いた というところなど
銛 harpoon
という表現は、手にもてるような銛なのか、
もっともっと邪悪な 大きな銛なのか
英語の表現がわかりません
それから、
「二人の隊員の名誉に懸けて」
というところも
For the honor of the both persons
みたいに for でいいのか、もっと適切な表現が
あるのか教えてください
船のスクリュウで殺された
も was killed with the screw
みたいに with でいいのか by なのか 日本人には
とても判別がむずかしいです
「はらわたが煮えくり返るほど怒る」
というところも
are boiling with rage
と表現しましたが、もっと適切な表現があるでしょうか
参考までに 不出来な英文を再掲いたします
The youtube ttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEIb○○○○ presents the following
news.
A former member of the Marine Sel○ Defense Force (Kai○o) said that some
members of the Chin○e fishing boat stuck two Kai○o members who fell into the
sea with harpoons.
Indeed, in Ishig○ki-jima Island outskirts, quite strict gag law of not saying
anything to this news, was spread at the same level as fascism.
For the honor of the both persons, who died at their post, he is presenting
this news now.
The both persons are veterans of being members of the agency eight years
together.
It is easily understood that it was an item which should have understood that
this news had great bad influence globally enough now.
However, the cabinet members of a country ordered concealment.
There is not such the humiliation in the past for Kai○o who set up life for
patrolling such territorial waters.
They got into the fishing boat daringly but they were dropped in the sea by the
cosh of the members of the fishing boat without being able to resist them with
being bound by the constitution Article NONE.
One person was helped but died instantly and another one was killed with the
screw of the Chin○e fishing boat.
At the time of the recent arrest of the captain, some members of the fishing
boat held the automatic gun in the ship. He told that he heard it from a
person of the sel○ defense official who moved to Kai○o.
Kai○o members could arrest the captain in danger, and it did not become the
fatal case somehow.
Although they compel to drive these peace officers into such dangerous
situation, the members in the Democra○c Party did not do anything.
Therefore, it seems that these officers are boiling with rage to the Democra○c
Party which decided the release of the captain plainly.
これは メッセージ 8171 (yumehon33 さん)への返信です.
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