Please correct my English
投稿者: yumehon33 投稿日時: 2010/11/08 04:37 投稿番号: [8171 / 17704]
英作文むずかしい
何回やっても
だれか 英語得意な人 添削して
The youtube ttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEIb○○○○ presents the following news.
A former member of the Marine Sel○ Defense Force (Kai○o) said that some members of the Chin○e fishing boat stuck two Kai○o members who fell into the sea with harpoons.
Indeed, in Ishig○ki-jima Island outskirts, quite strict gag law of not saying anything to this news, was spread at the same level as fascism.
For the honor of the both persons, who died at their post, he is presenting this news now.
The both persons are veterans of being members of the agency eight years together.
It is easily understood that it was an item which should have understood that this news had great bad influence globally enough now.
However, the cabinet members of a country ordered concealment.
There is not such the humiliation in the past for Kai○o who set up life for patrolling such territorial waters.
They got into the fishing boat daringly but they were dropped in the sea by the cosh of the members of the fishing boat without being able to resist them with being bound by the constitution Article NONE.
One person was helped but died instantly and another one was killed with the screw of the Chin○e fishing boat.
At the time of the recent arrest of the captain, some members of the fishing boat held the automatic gun in the ship. He told that he heard it from a person of the sel○ defense official who moved to Kai○o.
Kai○o members could arrest the captain in danger, and it did not become the fatal case somehow.
Although they compel to drive these peace officers into such dangerous situation, the members in the Democra○c Party did not do anything.
Therefore, it seems that these officers are boiling with rage to the Democra○c Party which decided the release of the captain plainly.
だれか 英語得意な人 添削して
The youtube ttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEIb○○○○ presents the following news.
A former member of the Marine Sel○ Defense Force (Kai○o) said that some members of the Chin○e fishing boat stuck two Kai○o members who fell into the sea with harpoons.
Indeed, in Ishig○ki-jima Island outskirts, quite strict gag law of not saying anything to this news, was spread at the same level as fascism.
For the honor of the both persons, who died at their post, he is presenting this news now.
The both persons are veterans of being members of the agency eight years together.
It is easily understood that it was an item which should have understood that this news had great bad influence globally enough now.
However, the cabinet members of a country ordered concealment.
There is not such the humiliation in the past for Kai○o who set up life for patrolling such territorial waters.
They got into the fishing boat daringly but they were dropped in the sea by the cosh of the members of the fishing boat without being able to resist them with being bound by the constitution Article NONE.
One person was helped but died instantly and another one was killed with the screw of the Chin○e fishing boat.
At the time of the recent arrest of the captain, some members of the fishing boat held the automatic gun in the ship. He told that he heard it from a person of the sel○ defense official who moved to Kai○o.
Kai○o members could arrest the captain in danger, and it did not become the fatal case somehow.
Although they compel to drive these peace officers into such dangerous situation, the members in the Democra○c Party did not do anything.
Therefore, it seems that these officers are boiling with rage to the Democra○c Party which decided the release of the captain plainly.
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