なぜ韓国人は、嫌われるのか？

＞I detected another mistake

↑ 　 誤 英語にかぶれてる在日英語学校生丸出し


↓正解

I 　 have found your mistake.
or I find your mistake.


＞What have made you write "stinks"?

↑誤 　

↓正解

What makes you writting "stinks " in your words.

or

What do you mean "stinks " in your writting.

＞you can be gone forever.

↑誤 　 Sounds very funny

↓正解

You get lost for good from here!